User talk:Adinulos

Week 4 Feedback

This is feedback on your Week 4 assignment.

• Thank you for submitting your assignment on time.
• You completed all of the tasks for this assignment, except for the following:
  • Please include the Acknowledgments statement: "Except for what is noted above, this individual journal entry was completed by me and not copied from another source." and your wiki signature.
  • Your citation to the Week 4 assignment has the correctly URL, but the name of the page was not changed to "Week 4" from "Week 2".

— Kam D. Dahlquist (talk) 10:04, 20 February 2020 (PST)

Week 3 Feedback

This is feedback on your Week 3 assignment.

• Thank you for submitting your assignment on time.
• You completed all the tasks, except for the following:
  • Your citations for the ebooks had an incorrect format. They are cited like a book, with editor names, and then have the "Retrieved..." statement at the end.
• Don't forget to add your wiki signature to your comment on the class journal page.

— Kam D. Dahlquist (talk) 16:37, 20 February 2020 (PST)'

Week 1 Feedback

This is feedback on your Week 1 assignment.

• Thank you for submitting your assignment on time.
• You wrote something in the summary field for 47 out of 58 saves, 81%. Keep up the good work, and remember, we are aiming for 100%!
• You completed all of the tasks! I have a few of minor comments to make the page look better:
  • Your e-mail address and the link to contact you through OWW are bleeding together on the same line. In wiki syntax, you actually need to skip lines to make things show up on different lines, a single "return" won't do it. Or you could use bullet points.
  • Under your "Research Experience", I would say "Research mentor: Dr. Okada" just to make it clear why you put that name there.
  • Your link to the MediaWiki Help in the Acknowledgments section is formatted incorrectly. It is an external link, not an internal link to OWW, so it only needs one set of square brackets and doesn't need the | symbol to separate the label. Always look at your pages after you save to see if it turned out the way you were expecting.
• You will be able to earn back the points lost in the assignment by submitting corrections by the Week 3 assignment deadline, 12:01am on Thursday, February 6.
• I answered your question on my User talk page. — Kam D. Dahlquist (talk) 15:58, 30 January 2020 (PST)