User talk:Dcartmel

Week 4 Feedback

This is feedback on your Week 4 assignment.

• Thank you for submitting your assignment on time.
• You completed all of the tasks for this assignment.
• There are a couple of issues with your Reference section:
  • The first and last names of the first author are mixed up; Irwin is the last name and Alexander is the first name.
  • Because this is a citation of a book, you do not need to have the "Retrieved..." statement at the end. That is only when you are citing an actual website.

— Kam D. Dahlquist (talk) 09:56, 20 February 2020 (PST)

Week 3 Feedback

This is feedback on your Week 3 assignment.

• You submitted the bulk of your assignment on time, but you made edits to the citations for the definitions 30 minutes past the deadline.
• You completed all the tasks, but there was an issue with your References section.
  • Your citations for the ebooks had an incorrect format for the editors' names. They should appear as last name, initials, instead of giving the actual first names.

— Kam D. Dahlquist (talk) 16:17, 20 February 2020 (PST)

Week 1 Feedback

This is feedback on your Week 1 assignment.

• Thank you for submitting your assignment on time.
• You wrote something in the summary field for 47 out of 48 saves, 97.9%! Keep up the excellent work!
• You completed all of the tasks, except for the following:
  • Please include a snail mail address. If you do not have a campus box, please use "Department of Biology, 1 LMU Drive, Los Angeles, CA 90045".
• To make your page look neater, I would remove the link to your Week 2 individual journal from the Contact Information section. It is redundant with your template links at the bottom of the page.
• You also don't need to provide a reference to the LMU EMS page in your References section. In this case, you were simply providing a hyperlink to that page to support your resume and were not taking information from that website to put on your own page. So, you can remove that reference from your references list.
• However, you do need to cite the Help:Images page in your list of references because you mentioned that you used it in your Acknowledgments section.
• You will be able to earn back the points lost in the assignment by submitting corrections by the Week 3 assignment deadline, 12:01am on Thursday, February 6.
• I answered your question on my User Talk page.

— Kam D. Dahlquist (talk) 15:05, 30 January 2020 (PST)